Look,that is Lin Yichen.and her English name is Ariel.She is 28 years old.But I don't think she isold.写的有没有错的地方.(除标点符号以外)

Look,that is Lin Yichen.and her English name is Ariel.She is 28 years old.But I don't think she isold.写的有没有错的地方.(除标点符号以外)
Look,that is Lin Yichen.and her English name is Ariel.She is 28 years old.But I don't think she is
old.写的有没有错的地方.(除标点符号以外)

Look,that is Lin Yichen.and her English name is Ariel.She is 28 years old.But I don't think she isold.写的有没有错的地方.(除标点符号以外)
Look,that is Lin Yichen,and her English name is Ariel.She is 28 years old.But I don't think she is old.
除了标点,没有别的错
我英语六级水平.

看，那是林依晨，她的英文名字是 Ariel，她28岁了，但是我认为她看上去没那么大。

Lin Yichen:改为Yichen Lin
姓在后，名在前（英文格式）

最后的old 前加上so
其它没错，中国名字不要换位置，就是姓在前

你看,那就是Lin Yichen.她的英文名字是爱丽儿。她是28岁。但我不认为她是。

瞧，那时Lin Yichen，她的英文名叫Ariel。她已经28岁了，但我不觉得她有那么大