这里有两篇英语作文希望可以找出语法错误之类总之求纠正One day,Tom decided to play a trick.He carried a long rope,and stopped a man and alady on the pavement.He asked they to help him with worry on his face but joy in his heart

这里有两篇英语作文希望可以找出语法错误之类总之求纠正One day,Tom decided to play a trick.He carried a long rope,and stopped a man and alady on the pavement.He asked they to help him with worry on his face but joy in his heart
这里有两篇英语作文希望可以找出语法错误之类总之求纠正
One day,Tom decided to play a trick.He carried a long rope,and stopped a man and alady on the pavement.He asked they to help him with worry on his face but joy in his heart.And he explained thet he was doing a school project which is measure the building.So he hope they can help him and the project just for a few mintues.They all glad to help the young boy.Tom went around the corner and asked they to hold one end of the rope.Then he went away and left the two people.The two people could not see each other so waited and waited.Tom hid behind a fence and watched.He told his friend Ben that he is playing a trick.And they all laughed at them.Aunt was angry about Tom and came up behind them.She asked Tom to stop this boring trick.
Three boys was fishing near Seaview Island,suddenly Suddenly,the water flooded the boat,and the engine could not start.They shouted for help when the other boat which passed by.But nobody give a hand to them,so they tried to start the engine again.Luckily,the engine started quckily.At last,they all went back to the Harbor safely.
what a exciting day!
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这里有两篇英语作文希望可以找出语法错误之类总之求纠正One day,Tom decided to play a trick.He carried a long rope,and stopped a man and alady on the pavement.He asked they to help him with worry on his face but joy in his heart
One day,Tom decided to play a trick.He carried a long rope,and stopped a man and a lady on the pavement.He asked them to help him with a worried look on his face but joy in his heart.And he explained that he was doing a school project which was to measure the building.So he hoped they could help him and the project just for a few mintues.They were all glad to help the young boy.Tom went around the corner and asked them to hold one end of the rope.Then he went away and left the two people there.The two people could not see each other so they waited and waited.Tom hid behind a fence and watched them.He told his friend Ben that he was playing a trick.And they all laughed at them.Aunt was angry withTom so she came over to them.She asked Tom to stop this boring trick.
Three boys were fishing near Seaview Island,Suddenly,the water flooded the boat,and the engine could not start.They shouted to another boat for help which was passing by.But nobody gave a hand to them,so they tried to start the engine again.Luckily,the engine started quckily.At last,they all went back to the Harbor safely.
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