请问可不可以帮我修改一下这篇英语作文啊,i don't know what i am waiting for?A future without result or one day you come back?i don't know...but i only know that i just want to be with youThough we offen quarrels,cold wars.and you ala

请问可不可以帮我修改一下这篇英语作文啊,i don't know what i am waiting for?A future without result or one day you come back?i don't know...but i only know that i just want to be with youThough we offen quarrels,cold wars.and you ala
请问可不可以帮我修改一下这篇英语作文啊,
i don't know what i am waiting for?
A future without result or one day you come back?
i don't know...
but i only know that i just want to be with you
Though we offen quarrels,cold wars.
and you alawys make me sad.
i still like this way.
because
after a while ,we also feel happy,also feel so sweet
i know this is our way of getting along with each other.
whether we have known each other very much.
whetner we have got along with each other for a long time.
so that it seems that we do not need to communicate
As long as we together,my heart has felt steady.
i know,
this is our habit
this is our emotion of four years,
this is that our love is turned into another emotion.
fish will lose life when leaving water
water will lose energy when leaving fish.
Just like you and me,
i can not hanven't you
you can not without me!
I have confidence in you.
really!
Can we face all difficulty bravely?
I sure we can.
we work hard for our future together.
I should be satisfied.
Because you are still at my side.
Because i alawys in your heart.
I don't want to give up again this time.
I hope
you are the same as me too.

请问可不可以帮我修改一下这篇英语作文啊,i don't know what i am waiting for?A future without result or one day you come back?i don't know...but i only know that i just want to be with youThough we offen quarrels,cold wars.and you ala
I don't know what I am waiting for?
A future without result or one day you come back?
I don't know...
What I only know is that I just want to be with you
Though we often quarrel,and are in cold war.
and you often make me sad.
I still like this way.
because
after a while ,we feel happy and so sweet
i know this is our way of getting along with each other.
we have known each other very much.
we have got along with each other for a long time.
it seems that we do not need to communicate
As long as we are together,my mood is steady.
i know,
this is our habit
this is our love of four years,
our love has turn into another emotion.
fish will lose life when leaves water
water will lose energy when leaves fish.
Just like you and me,
i can not lose you
you can not be without me!
I believe in you.
really!
Can we face with all difficulty bravely?
I believe we can.
we work hard for our future together.
I should be satisfied.
Because you are still by my side.
Because i alawys in your heart.
I still don't want to give up this time.
I hope
you have the same idea as me.

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