英语短文看下有没有语法错误并改正 谢谢!Nowadays, more and more people prefer talking about vocational education or college education ?, because it plays a significant role in daily life. It has caused substantial impact on the societ

英语短文看下有没有语法错误并改正 谢谢!Nowadays, more and more people prefer talking about vocational education or college education ?, because it plays a significant role in daily life. It has caused substantial impact on the societ
英语短文看下有没有语法错误并改正 谢谢!
Nowadays, more and more people prefer talking about vocational education or college education ?, because it plays a significant role in daily life. It has caused substantial impact on the society. The number of people who take the college entrance examination has been decreasing these years.
Some people consider vocational education an advantage to job-hunting, while others argue that a college diploma is more important. ln my opinion, college education is more advisable or most people. First, college education is systematic and students can learn a lot in many aspects. Unlike vocational, which always focuses on just one job skill, college education enables students to develop different po-tentials. Second, to obtain a higher degree, such as a master’s degree, one has to go through college education to a bachelor’s degree first.
Just as the old saying goes" Waste not, want not.”(旧的不去,新的不来.这个不确定帮忙看下有没有写错) In a society where any job skill may become outdate-ed quickly with the appearance of new technologies, the limitations of vocational education prove even more serious. Only college education can prepare us for future challenges.

英语短文看下有没有语法错误并改正 谢谢!Nowadays, more and more people prefer talking about vocational education or college education ?, because it plays a significant role in daily life. It has caused substantial impact on the societ
Nowadays,more and more people prefer talking about vocational education or college education,
because it plays a significant role in daily life.It has caused substantial impact on the society.
The number of people who take the college entrance examination has been decreasing these years.
Some people consider vocational education an advantage to job-hunting,while others argue
that a college diploma is more important.In my opinion,college education is more advisable for
most people.First,college education is systematic and students can learn a lot in many aspects.
Unlike vocational education,which always focuses on just one job skill,college education enables
students to develop different potentials.Second,to obtain a higher degree,such as a master's
degree,one has to go through college education to a bachelor's degree first.
In a society where any job skill may become outdated quickly with the appearance of new
technologies,the limitations of vocational education prove even more serious.Only college
education can prepare us for future challenges.
Waste not,want not.的意思是“不浪费就不会缺少任何东西.”用在这里不太合适,可以考虑删除.

more and more people prefer talking about vocational education than college education,because it plays a significant role in daily life.
ln my opinion, college education is more advisable for most...

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more and more people prefer talking about vocational education than college education,because it plays a significant role in daily life.
ln my opinion, college education is more advisable for most people.
Unlike vocational education, which always focuses on one job skill, college education enables students to develop different potentials.
Second, in order to obtain a higher degree, such as a master’s degree, one has to go through college education to a bachelor’s degree first.
Without discarding the old there would be no coming of the new.旧的不去,新的不来
In a society where any job skills may become outdated quickly with the appearance of new technologies, the limitations of vocational education can be seen more obviously.

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Some people consider vocational education an advantage to job-hunting, while others argue that a college diploma is more important.这句话有点问题，改成这样比较好点：some people consider that vocational education is an...

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Some people consider vocational education an advantage to job-hunting, while others argue that a college diploma is more important.这句话有点问题，改成这样比较好点：some people consider that vocational education is an advantage for job-hunting,while others argee with a college diploma more important.
ln my opinion, college education is more advisable or most people.这句也有点问题，改成：in my opinions,college education is more advisable for many students.

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