帮忙改下英语作文.怎么提高啊My name is Lihua ,who is a volunteer of the youth hostel.I enjoy traveling very much.As we know ,it is popular to help others for free when you are travelling in the Internation..Meanwhile ,it is also welcome t

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帮忙改下英语作文.怎么提高啊My name is Lihua ,who is a volunteer of the youth hostel.I enjoy traveling very much.As we know ,it is popular to help others for free when you are travelling in the Internation..Meanwhile ,it is also welcome t

帮忙改下英语作文.怎么提高啊My name is Lihua ,who is a volunteer of the youth hostel.I enjoy traveling very much.As we know ,it is popular to help others for free when you are travelling in the Internation..Meanwhile ,it is also welcome t
帮忙改下英语作文.怎么提高啊
My name is Lihua ,who is a volunteer of the youth hostel.I enjoy traveling very much.
As we know ,it is popular to help others for free when you are travelling in the Internation..Meanwhile ,it is also welcome to make volunteer travel in china.
There are a lot of advantages.For instance ,the free accommodation not only can save money,but also help us understand the special culture .Ii is worth doing it.However ,it also has its own disadvantages.The condition of de living is not great .Due to the strange of the place,we may lose a sense of safeness.
IN my opinions,\x05we should do more volunteer travels.Excises as we need ,we should do more change to train ourselves.When we help others ,we can also learn much form it .
So come to join us!

帮忙改下英语作文.怎么提高啊My name is Lihua ,who is a volunteer of the youth hostel.I enjoy traveling very much.As we know ,it is popular to help others for free when you are travelling in the Internation..Meanwhile ,it is also welcome t
make volunteer travel in china :volunteer---》volunteers
the free accommodation not only can save money:not only can the free accommodation save money 这样比较好,用倒装句
有一些单词拼写错误

都没什么问题 就是几处单词写错了

在句子 "It is worth doing it" 中,你不停反复使用了 “it” ,其实你只需要写 “it is wort doing” 就可以了。 里面有很多语法,拼写和标点都用错。

My name is Lihua .A volunteer of the youth hostel. travel is my favourite hobby,i hope i can travel around the world one day.