短文改错.只允许修改十出.每句最多2处.Dalian ,a city by sea ,is quite beautiful and the air there is so good to breathe .It is easy to go by train; beside ,you can take a bus or piane as well .Together with my parents ,I went to Dalian

短文改错.只允许修改十出.每句最多2处.Dalian ,a city by sea ,is quite beautiful and the air there is so good to breathe .It is easy to go by train; beside ,you can take a bus or piane as well .Together with my parents ,I went to Dalian
短文改错.只允许修改十出.每句最多2处.
Dalian ,a city by sea ,is quite beautiful and the air there is so good to breathe .It is easy to go by train; beside ,you can take a bus or piane as well .Together with my parents ,I went to Dalian for a trip in last month .We visited many interesting place,having lots of fun.Dalian is such wonderfur a city as even many foreigners there and talk with them .Most of them said they enjoyed our stay in Dalian .After staying there for ten days ,we returned home ,tired but happy.
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短文改错.只允许修改十出.每句最多2处.Dalian ,a city by sea ,is quite beautiful and the air there is so good to breathe .It is easy to go by train; beside ,you can take a bus or piane as well .Together with my parents ,I went to Dalian
Dalian,a city by the sea,is quite beautiful and the air there is so good to breathe.It is easy to go there by train;besides,you can take a bus or plane as well.Together with my parents,I went to Dalian for a trip last month.We visited many interesting places,having lots of fun.Dalian is so beautiful a city that even many foreigners go and work there.I met some foreigners there and talked with them.Most of them said they enjoyed their stay in Dalian.After staying there for ten days,we returned home,tired but happy.

第一行 1by the sea 2 breathe 去掉e 变成动词 3 go there by train
第二行 4 beside改为besides,译为 除了
第三行 5 in the last month 6 place 加s 前面是many后跟复数 7 such a wonderful
第四行 8 去掉even 9 talk...

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第一行 1by the sea 2 breathe 去掉e 变成动词 3 go there by train
第二行 4 beside改为besides,译为 除了
第三行 5 in the last month 6 place 加s 前面是many后跟复数 7 such a wonderful
第四行 8 去掉even 9 talk with 前缺少主语we 10 our stay 改成 their stay

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beside 改成besides
such wonderful a place 改成such a wonderful place或so wonderful a place
it is easy to go by train改成it is easy to go there by train
in last month 改成last month,去掉in
having ...

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beside 改成besides
such wonderful a place 改成such a wonderful place或so wonderful a place
it is easy to go by train改成it is easy to go there by train
in last month 改成last month,去掉in
having lots of fun 改成and had lots of fun
Dalian is such wonderful a city as even many foreigners there and talk with them.这句好混乱
改成Dalian is such a wonderful city so that many foreigners went there and we talked with them.
Most of them said they enjoyed our stay in Dalian 把our 改成their

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beside 改成besides
such wonderful a place 改成such a wonderful place或so wonderful a place
it is easy to go by train改成it is easy to go there by train
in last month 改成last month,去掉in
having ...

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beside 改成besides
such wonderful a place 改成such a wonderful place或so wonderful a place
it is easy to go by train改成it is easy to go there by train
in last month 改成last month,去掉in
having lots of fun 改成and had lots of fun
Dalian is such wonderful a city as even many foreigners there and talk with them.这句好混乱
改成Dalian is such a wonderful city so that many foreigners went there and we talked with them.
Most of them said they enjoyed our stay in Dalian 把our 改成their 吃饭不好第一行 1by the sea 2 breathe 去掉e 变成动词 3 go there by train
第二行 4 beside改为besides,译为 除了
第三行 5 in the last month 6 place 加s 前面是many后跟复数 7 such a wonderful
第四行 8 去掉even 9 talk with 前缺少主语we 10 our stay 改成 their stay

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正确答案：
1、by sea改为by the sea
2、go by train改为go there by train
3、beside改为besides
4、in last month去掉in
5、place改为places
6、wonderful a 改为a wonderful
7、as改为that，构成such……that……
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正确答案：
1、by sea改为by the sea
2、go by train改为go there by train
3、beside改为besides
4、in last month去掉in
5、place改为places
6、wonderful a 改为a wonderful
7、as改为that，构成such……that……
8、foreigners there改为foreigners are there
9、talk with them改为 talk with us
10、enjoyed our stay改为enjoyed their stay

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