求大神帮忙修改这篇作文（英语）Unforgettable dayChinese New year in a particular year,my family and I went shopping.We bought a lot of things,such as ice cream,popcorn,oranges,milk and bread.Mom gave me bought a lot of toys.After that w

求大神帮忙修改这篇作文（英语）Unforgettable dayChinese New year in a particular year,my family and I went shopping.We bought a lot of things,such as ice cream,popcorn,oranges,milk and bread.Mom gave me bought a lot of toys.After that w
求大神帮忙修改这篇作文（英语）
Unforgettable day
Chinese New year in a particular year,my family and I went shopping.
We bought a lot of things,such as ice cream,popcorn,oranges,milk and bread.Mom gave me bought a lot of toys.
After that we went to the zoo.I see a lot of animals,funny monkeys,lions is terrible,very cute hamsters.
We ate lunch under a tree.My dad told us a lot of jokes.Very interesting.
Really memorable day
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求大神帮忙修改这篇作文（英语）Unforgettable dayChinese New year in a particular year,my family and I went shopping.We bought a lot of things,such as ice cream,popcorn,oranges,milk and bread.Mom gave me bought a lot of toys.After that w
an unforgettable day
Chinese New Year is a particular festival.I went shopping with my family.I bought a lot of things,such as ...My mom bought many toys for me.After that,we went to the zoo.I saw lots of animals.The monkeys are funny.The lions are terrible.The hamsters are very cute.We had/ate lunch under a tree.My dad told us some jokes.They were very interesting.It is a really memorable day.

第一句 an unforgettable day

Unforgettable day
Chinese New Year is a particular festival. This year I went shoping along with my family.下一句没问题。Mom bought me a lot of toys.After that, we went to the zoo. I saw a lot of animals...

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Unforgettable day
Chinese New Year is a particular festival. This year I went shoping along with my family.下一句没问题。Mom bought me a lot of toys.After that, we went to the zoo. I saw a lot of animals. Monkeys are funny; lions are terrible. Hamsters are cute.下两句没问题.It was very interesting. Today is really a memorable day.

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