看看有错没有,可以适当扩展：Yesterday,I goed home.It was beginning of the summer camp.I was very happy.Because I can play computer games every day.I don′t have to do homework every night.But I have to get up eariy and play sports,I don

看看有错没有,可以适当扩展：Yesterday,I goed home.It was beginning of the summer camp.I was very happy.Because I can play computer games every day.I don′t have to do homework every night.But I have to get up eariy and play sports,I don
看看有错没有,可以适当扩展：
Yesterday,I goed home.It was beginning of the summer camp.I was very happy.Because I can play computer games every day.I don′t have to do homework every night.But I have to get up eariy and play sports,I don′t like playing sports ,it′s boring or difficult.
I want to go to my grandparents′s home.There is fun.i like there.But l can′t go to there now.
OK.l am very happy now.
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【summer camp】改成【summer vacation】

看看有错没有,可以适当扩展：Yesterday,I goed home.It was beginning of the summer camp.I was very happy.Because I can play computer games every day.I don′t have to do homework every night.But I have to get up eariy and play sports,I don
Yesterday,I went home.It was the beginning of the summer vacation.I was very happy.Because I can play computer games every day.I don′t have to do homework every night.But I had to get up eariy and did some sports, I don′t like sport ,it′s boring and difficult.
I want to go to my grandparents home.Is fun there.I like there.But l can′t go to there now.
OK.l am very happy now.

Yesterday,I went home.It was the beginning of the summer camping.I was very happy,Because I can play computer games everyday.I don′t have to do homework every night.But I have to get up earier and do ...

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Yesterday,I went home.It was the beginning of the summer camping.I was very happy,Because I can play computer games everyday.I don′t have to do homework every night.But I have to get up earier and do sports, I don′t like doing sports ,it′s boring and difficult.
I want to go to my grandparents′s home.It is fun there .I like there.But l can′t go there now.
OK.l am very happy now

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Yesterday,I went back home.It was the beginning of the summer vacation.I'm very happy Because I can play computer games every day and that I don′t have to do homework every night.But I have to get up ...

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Yesterday,I went back home.It was the beginning of the summer vacation.I'm very happy Because I can play computer games every day and that I don′t have to do homework every night.But I have to get up eariy and , I don′t like playing sports ,it′s boring and difficult.
I want to go to visit my grandparents.It is fun there.I like there.But l can′t go there now.
I hope I can have a happy sommer vacation.

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Yesterday,I went home.It was the beginning of the summer vacation.I was very happy.Because I can play computer games every day.I don′t have to do homework every night.But I have to get up early and do...

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Yesterday,I went home.It was the beginning of the summer vacation.I was very happy.Because I can play computer games every day.I don′t have to do homework every night.But I have to get up early and do exercise, I don′t like doing exercises ,it′s boring and difficult.
I want to go to my grandparents′s home.that place is fun.i like it.But l can′t go there now.
OK.l am very happy now.

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