作业帮求英语高手帮我检查英语文章有没有错误 一定要仔细检查 因为错误一般自己看不出来 需要别人来检查 Last night ,I dreamed of Justin Bieber ,In the dream ,we were in the mountain ,trees surrounded us,birds sang to u
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求英语高手帮我检查英语文章有没有错误 一定要仔细检查 因为错误一般自己看不出来 需要别人来检查 Last night ,I dreamed of Justin Bieber ,In the dream ,we were in the mountain ,trees surrounded us,birds sang to u
求英语高手帮我检查英语文章有没有错误 一定要仔细检查 因为错误一般自己看不出来 需要别人来检查 Last night ,I dreamed of Justin Bieber ,In the dream ,we were in the mountain ,trees surrounded us,birds sang to us,I was very happy,I called Justin Bieber's name ,He looked at me and laughed,he held me in his arms ,I thought I was the happiest girl in the world,he gave me a kiss on the cheek,I kissed him too.At last,I asked my friends to take photos for us,then we took lots of photos of him and me.When I came home ,I turned on my phone,I found the photo is all my own ,there is no Justin Bieber in the picture,I cried heart out to find my friends ,I wanted to know why...But I wake up ,I find that it's a dream ,I am sad but happy,I dream of my favorite star again,it's amazing ,I love him very much,I don't go to his concert because I don't have enough money ,I am sure that I will go to his concert when I grow up.
求英语高手帮我检查英语文章有没有错误 一定要仔细检查 因为错误一般自己看不出来 需要别人来检查 Last night ,I dreamed of Justin Bieber ,In the dream ,we were in the mountain ,trees surrounded us,birds sang to u
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汉化英语风格十足，好弱智的文章，而且错误百出，这种文章就跟废纸一样没什么差别，根本没有修改的必要。有时间的话，建议你多看看英语书籍，提高词汇量吧！
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